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Unworthy of you,
All I can hope to possess,
Is this memory.
Haiku.
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xXI-Feel-InfiniteXx Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is so powerful even though it is short - good job, great haiku :love:
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ShiningSteel Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :D I'm glad that you liked it!
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punx-chan89 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful :)
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ShiningSteel Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it. :heart:
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punx-chan89 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YOu're welcome :hug:
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ZellRozen Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
Ah the memory of one's past loves. A cherished tresure to revisit when one feels the longing of a happier time. 
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ShiningSteel Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's the emotion I was going for. :) Thank you for your kind words!
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theskymew Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Wow, this is brilliant! Beautiful! :')
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ShiningSteel Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :hug:
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theskymew Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
That's ok, I loved it! (I'm pretty crap at poetry myself! :D )
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